I like how you made everything neat and easy to read.Also how much detail you used!I liked how you used two stradegys because if i didnt understand one i had another one to look at!
Both answers were correct and you both coppied tittle and the number line. For both of the samples for the paragraphs their was only about 1-2 sentences which doesnt really concider a paragraph so maybe you should work on that a little bit. The samples both explained well.The samples are both excellent and both great ! The only thing you should work on is the paragraphing.
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I like how you made everything neat and easy to read.Also how much detail you used!I liked how you used two stradegys because if i didnt understand one i had another one to look at!
ReplyDeleteBoth answers were correct and you both coppied tittle and the number line. For both of the samples for the paragraphs their was only about 1-2 sentences which doesnt really concider a paragraph so maybe you should work on that a little bit. The samples both explained well.The samples are both excellent and both great ! The only thing you should work on is the paragraphing.
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